A New World Upon Me - Story Changes StuffA New World Upon Me - Story Changes StuffA New World Upon Me - Story Changes Stuff by DazzyDrawingN2
Hi, during this story many changes were made pretty much all the way through, but what changes were there? I list some of them, plus some other stuff that could of been put in it, but didn't.
1) When I first started the story, the character called Skyron was originally going to be a white figure, with a black triangle on her face, with long black hair. However due to the white world she lived in, she wasn't totally visible, and it would of been a bit difficult to write, so she was changed to a black figure instead, with a white triangle on her face, and white hair.
2) The main character called Kam is actually based on my girlfriend, her name is Kristina. I was going to call the main character Kristina, however I needed a different name, something a bit more, you know shorter. However, Kam is kinda based off my girlfriend, she's 24, and living in the USA, there are things related to her in the story.
3) In Chapter 5, the
A New World Upon Me - Chapter 5Chapter 5: Confronting The DevouringA New World Upon Me - Chapter 5 by DazzyDrawingN2
----In The Mind Of Kam----
It is time, I have finally realised my purpose in this world called Whiterona. I have to be strong, yet I am still nervous. I do fear what wil happen if I don't save everyone, I too will be gone if I don't succeed with my task. I still have some questions to ask Skyron, like the newcomers thing, and others but it'll have to wait until I have dealt with the devouring, well that's if I live to see it through. It's time to meet up with The King, and let him know I am ready for this big challenge that is before me.
Kam and Skyron entered the throne room from the left sidedoor, and Skyron bowed in front of the King. Kam hadn't done that before when she met him the first time, so she did likewise this time.
The King: "Well well well, it is nice to see you again Kam, how are you feeling?"
Kam: "I'm alright, I'm a bit nervous about this still, I am very sorry for storming off before."
A New World Upon Me - Chapter 4Chapter 4: Unlock The Power WithinA New World Upon Me - Chapter 4 by DazzyDrawingN2
---------In The Mind Of Kam----------
So here I am now, sitting down at a table in a resting area in this pretty strange castle in the world of Whiterona. Well I'm glad I don't feel tired anymore, but I can't wait to get back to my world, and get some sleep. Well that is if I DO get back there, I don't know at the moment. I still can't believe I'm the key to saving this place, what did Skyron mean about newcomers, have there been other human beings like me that have entered this world? That's another question that I want an answer to before I exit this place. Oh.........somebody has sat down next to me, looks like a dude, looks like a black figure with a very very long white beard, with....what the, three white triangle eyes, holy crap man. He looks creepy, but I might aswell say hello, he's probably the friendly type, or maybe not, but hoping for the former. Here goes nothing..........
Kam: "Hey there, hows it going?
A New World Upon Me - Chapter 3Chapter 3: Training Of The WayA New World Upon Me - Chapter 3 by DazzyDrawingN2
----In The Mind Of Kam----
I couldn't believe this was happening! My mind was all over the place trying to take it all in as I just hurried around this castle, trying to find somewhere to just hide, and hope they would give up looking for me. Maybe they would find somebody else to face that black hole, can't believe they even called it something, what was it, the devouring? I'm just a 24 year old woman living in the United States, I have no super powers, I'm just a human being, and human beings don't have powers like those you'd see in a comic like Superman or Wonder Woman. This bites, I'm tired still, and I need to try to find a resting place.
Kam saw a door, and decided to head in. The room was empty, infact there was nothing in it at all, it was just silver room. Kam closed the door, and just sat down in the middle of the room, and curled herself up. She started to cry, until there was a knock on the door.
A New World Upon Me - Chapter 2Chapter 2 - Meet The KingA New World Upon Me - Chapter 2 by DazzyDrawingN2
----In The Mind Of Kam----
So here I was, in this strange white world called Whiterona, this place wasn't a dream at all, it was totally real. And here I was following this woman figure that goes by the name of Skyron. She says I'm the key, the key to saving this world? But how? I didn't know all the answers, but I sure as hell needed to ask more questiond than I did when I first met her. I was feeling tired, well I was heading to bed, and then somehow ended up here, I needed to take a nap, so I asked Skyron about it.
Kam: "Skyron, I'm getting tired here."
Skyron didn't say anything as they kept walking in the whiteness.
Kam: "Er...Skyron, did you hear me?"
Skyron just kept walking, without a reply.
Kam: "HEY SKYRON, DID YOU HEAR ANYTHING I SAID, I'M TIRED!!!!!!!"
Skyron stopped, and Kam bumped into her from behind.
Skyron: "....................The devouring is growing................"
Kam: "Huh, the what is growing?"
A New World Upon Me - Chapter 1Chapter 1 - I'm Not DreamingA New World Upon Me - Chapter 1 by DazzyDrawingN2
----In The Mind Of ???----
It started just like any other night, I headed to my room, turned my lamp off, and got into bed. I threw the bed cover over my head, and just closed my eyes waiting to fall asleep. But then suddenly it became bright with my eyes shut, I opened them instantly, and realised, did I really fall asleep this quickly that I'm now in a very bright dream?
No longer was I in my bedroom, or even my world for that matter. I looked around, everywhere I looked it was just white space, there was nothing other than white stuff, no buildings, pretty much nothing. The floor was solid, but that was white too. I had no sense of direction, so I didn't really want to move, the spot I was standing seemed a safe bet to stay put.
Suddenly in the distance out of the corner of my eye I noticed something. At first I didn't know what it was, but it was getting bigger, and bigger until it became visible as a black figure of some kind. It looked human in
You Know It's Love... I know it TooSweet love, hold out your armsYou Know It's Love... I know it Too by FireKATLit
For I fall in a love induced swoon
My knees buckle at your charms
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Your words, they echo in my head
You touch me like no other love
Such gorgeous, lovely words you’ve said
When you say we’re like two doves
How dearly my heart aches for you
The pain it must endure
The thought that I cannot be with you
A pain only you can cure
Darren, my love, my sweet, sweet dove
Angel of my life
Your eyes gleam like the stars above
Enchanting and so nice
Darren, please hold me tight
Embrace me when I get scared at night
How I long to see you face to face
I yearn to hold you close
You’ll pull me from my saddened state
Such a perfect man I chose
I thought I was alone
The only one like me
How could I have known
How cruel the world can be?
Then I met you
It felt so right
Oh yes, it’s true
How we’re both alike
Fear not dear one
We’re not alone anymore
To my lover I
The Genie and the Girl Part 4The genie felt as though his heart had skipped a beat. It was the first time anyone had done something for him. He’d been doing this for many millennia… And this was the first thing anyone had done anything just for him. He wrestled with a sea of emotions. For starters, complete and utter gratitude. But then the bitterness returned. Why did it take so long for him to find such a human? Then there was confusion. It had been a long, long time before he did find this human, letting him know greed reigned supreme with anyone who discovered the lamp. But why was this girl so different? Why didn’t she use up her wishes like everyone else?The Genie and the Girl Part 4 by FireKATLit
She turned from him, quick to avert her gaze. But not quick enough. He could see the sadness. As she turned to leave, something fell from her pocket. It was a gold pocket watch. Gold. So many people threw their wishes away for it. The genie shook his head. In his eyes, they had pretty much done the same as the girl and wasted their wishes.
Stepping Through Time It was in September 2014 that our lives took a dramatic turn. I’ll never forget it. It happened in the evening and I was completely unaware of it. I had to go to bed early because the next morning was the day we did our usually grocery shopping. But it was also Sunday and Dad wanted everyone up early so we could beat the crowds. I wake up, get dressed and walk out into the living room to find dad and grandma standing over grandpa, trying to figure out how they were going to get him off of the couch and back into the bedroom. It was then that I learned that grandpa hadn’t gone to bed. He’d been in the living room the entire night. Back then, I felt nothing but frustration. No sudden sense of dread, no intense emotion that would drive me to tears. I simply felt bad that this had happened and in my mind, I figured it wouldn’t be long before he was up and walking again and things were back to normal. I never imagined it would lead to somStepping Through Time by FireKATLit
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Before You Go Ahead and Take That... Everything that can come back and bite you in the butt for stealing--------------Before You Go Ahead and Take That... by FireKATLit
So you’re sitting at the head of your dining room table, cake in front of you, and surrounded by loved ones, all anticipating the exciting moment when you open your gifts. And you’re just as exhilarated as they are. You can’t wait to see what they got you, your mom especially, since you’ve dropped hints of what you wanted in the weeks leading up to this moment. You smile as she approaches the table, a gift wrapped box in her hands. You can hardly contain yourself. You feel like you’re going to burst, you’re so happy!
Once you’ve blown the candles out, she pushes the cake aside and sets your gift on the placemat in front of you. Her smile is as wide as yours. She’s so proud as she watches you tear the wrapping paper. And she’s still smiling even when your ex
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